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The sweetest tongue has sharpest tooth,

The mighty prince may be a liar.

When he speaks of candy, dear,

He does not speak the truth.

He's watching and waiting, child,

He's waiting for you to come.

Itching to grab you, dear,

Though his temper may seem mild.

He'll snatch you away,

From the home which you love so.

The trust that you doth have in him,

Quickly it will fray.

So listen carefully, darling child:

The sweetest tongue has sharpest tooth,

The wonderful prince doth not speak the truth!

So sweet little girl, he is dangerous, you see!

Do your best and don't be beguiled . . .
:iconxxshadowlunaxx:

Author's Comments

Because I heard of a child abduction in my neighborhood . . . Sorry, I know the ending sucks.

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:iconfantastic-mash:
First great one I've come across in a while. I'm inspired with new ideas after this one. And the ending doesn't suck. I really like it as a whole. It just seems so concrete. 8) (Fav)
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:iconxxshadowlunaxx:
Thankies! Comments are always appreciated n___n And you read the artist's comments (@w@)! Thanks a bunchles!

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"If I make no sense, and what I say makes no sense, then that makes total sense." -Nathanael Huddleson
:iconvictorianlolita:
This was wonderfully written! I had the idea of a victorian giving her daughter a warning. Though I believe I am very far off. Still, this is an amazing piece!

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:blackrose: Even in the darkness of life, love is always found. :blackrose:

Love the Rainbow, Taste the Rainbow
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:iconxxshadowlunaxx:
Thank you! That was kinda my intention, I wanted to give it a kinda old-style feel. Comment greatly appreciated as always n__n Thanks a bunch!

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"If I make no sense, and what I say makes no sense, then that makes total sense." -Nathanael Huddleson
:iconvictorianlolita:
You're very welcome!

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:blackrose: Even in the darkness of life, love is always found. :blackrose:

Love the Rainbow, Taste the Rainbow
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:

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